I need feedback from you!
Please help me with my business card design!
The time is around 4am, and I have been working on my business card design for at least 5 hours straight by now. Am I even on the right track? Is my design too childlike, or unprofessional? I would like to know what other people think, so please give me any comment!
Thank you for your time.
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hey Yuka! I really like all your business cards - really shows your playfulness of your work. I don't know if I like any one more than the rest - I like the yellow one (second from the bottom) because the border around your illustration isn't too dark - I feel that a darker border segments the card too much. I do like the text on the green card because it's easier to read (contrast of the green and text color) I will say that I like the yellow background the most so maybe if you tweek the color of the text it will be better?
hey Yuka!
I really like the green one because it is very clear and easy to read...but I think a slight texture element on the background, like you have around your picture on the yellow ones, would be nice to keep the background from looking flat?
I would just use two colors of text, three is too busy on such a small space...
I like the second one from the bottom. But I think you should tweak the text colour to make it more readable (avoiding white-on-yellow), and don't make it too small. I got away with 8.5 point text on mine. You *have* to print these out to really see how they look... don't trust the computer monitor! Oh, and don't forget the 1/8" bleed around the edges; you'll need it for the coloured background. The printing service should tell you how much bleed you'll need.
I like the green one the most! The yellow designs are interesting but the background color and the text make it difficult to read. I say go with the green one!
Thanks for all your comments!
I'm working on the second design (the green one), so I'll load up the new version sometime this week.
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